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I don't think you need the one in someone in this or am I wrong and this sentence is correct because if it is please explain?







You're absolutely correct. Fixed for the next update now. Thanks!

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I think you missplaced the apostrophe.








Added to the list of fixes! Thanks!

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Thank you for the kind feedback!
I'll change the layout of it for next update, is there any way you could tell me what device you're playing on so I can try and emulate it in order to make sure the positioning is better before pushing the update?

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I think you missed an o in choosing.

Thank you!

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Just found out about this game. Really nice. Hope to see more. Good luck!!

Thank you! I'm hoping to have the next update out after the holidays.

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The backgrounds are absolutely and stunningly GORGEOUS!

I really love the premise and characters so far. Will definitely be following the project. Good stuff :D

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Thank you for the kind feedback, and thanks for playing!

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Space Daddy Bear. I approve. >:^)

Space Daddy Bear, bring me to the stars!

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👀 OK Grunt I see you, gotta add yet another VN to the list of things I'll be awaiting with bated breath for. For those who haven't read it, you should def check it out! It's 🔥👌🔥

:pierreblush:

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Is the only love interest Commander Mike? or is Doctor Charles available too? If so, how can we get on track for Charles route?

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Hello!

Spoilers ahead.

 There are currently three possible interests. Nick, Commander Mike and Doctor Charles. As for Nick the very start matters some. As for Doctor Charles, you can start by picking him when you're asked towards the end of the day.  There will be a lot more of him in the next update. You're not locked into any one route unless you decide to not encourage Nick, which rather locks you out if his route.

If you want to spend a little extra time with the doctor, pick to not encourage Nick. It does however not influence the romance.

Thanks for reading the story!

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Will the dragon be a route?

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That's an interesting question. He doesn't have a sprite, though... 

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As of now that's not the plan, but you've given me something to think about..

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Only asked cause the way you introduced him seemed like a main interest type situation and his personality is not passerby generic

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Finally! Sprites, the thing that everyone has been waiting!

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man i finished this demo, and i have to say that i really look forward to seeing how this story will unfold, and the reference to Limits VN just got me there like WOW i loved it, please keep it up with the good work, best of luck and stay safe.

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What's new in the newest update?

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Hi, just bug fixes for the path where you chose not to encourage Nick, and rephrasing a few lines / spelling errors. The next update will have a DevLog and should feature 15-20k more words. The length of the game should be about doubled.

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I curious of how the character look now, the art background very smooth and the song chosen so relaxing making me very enjoyable reading text. . . All thing considering great project you got so far, looking forward to the story  and have a nice day<3

Thanks for checking out my project!

There's things in the works for the character art, and hopefully there'll be something incoming in the next version!

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I am being blasted by a lot of "if nick_present == True:" code errors it is making it to play this visual novel.

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I think there’s something wrong on how you download/unzipped it. Try to delete and download it again.

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I've had the same problem, and I've reinstalled it a few times now, no luck.

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I’ve found out what it’s about. If you make Nick apply with you, those messages won’t appear, but if you didn’t make Nick apply, it will always appear to the next sentence where Nick should be involved.

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Hi, I will upload a patch for this within an hour or two.

This will be fixed in a little bit!

Hi, I will upload a patch for this within an hour or two.

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This is the beginning of a legend Grunt! I hope you'll see this passion project of yours through.

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Love the writing on this novel can't wait for the future update, you had me at Norman Easter egg

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